I applaud your artwork
However the break in her drawn lips make it look like Haoling has a moustache..

Mikuo_Hatsune wrote:I applaud your artwork
However the break in her drawn lips make it look like Haoling has a moustache..

Thank you, though I'm not seeing the moustache my self. It's how a lot of artists draw mouths (CLAMP is mainly where I've gotten it from, and a little of Ken Akamatsu) so I just see it as natural.

It only looks like a mustache because there's what looks like lips beneath it that aren't readily visible. And Aya, the more you talk, the more interests of yours that coincide with mine come up. (First right to left manga read was Wish and own volumes 1-28 of Negima! and 1-4 of Love Hina.)

blade_anime wrote:It only looks like a mustache because there's what looks like lips beneath it that aren't readily visible. And Aya, the more you talk, the more interests of yours that coincide with mine come up. (First right to left manga read was Wish and own volumes 1-28 of Negima! and 1-4 of Love Hina.)

I'll see what I can do with the lips tomorrow. It's..well....it;s tomorrow right now (3 in the morning) But I need to sleep. =~='
And really? My first EVER manga was Card Captor Sakura (then Angelic Layer...and I have tonnes of other CLAMP) and Negima is currently one of my fave mangas ever! >w<

I lied. I did it tonight (er, thismorning?) anyway.


Does that look a little better?

A bit. There's still something off about it, but I can't place it, I'll get back to you if and when I figure it out.

I tried again, using a less chibi approach. (I also made some other minor changes as advised by a RP buddy)

oOnyaOo wrote:

Mikuo_Hatsune wrote:I applaud your artwork
However the break in her drawn lips make it look like Haoling has a moustache..

Thank you, though I'm not seeing the moustache my self. It's how a lot of artists draw mouths (CLAMP is mainly where I've gotten it from, and a little of Ken Akamatsu) so I just see it as natural.

I know its how alot of artist draw mouths but how you executed it made it look like a moustache to me IMHO

but the last 2 pics have made it look better good work

Mikuo_Hatsune wrote:

oOnyaOo wrote:

Mikuo_Hatsune wrote:I applaud your artwork
However the break in her drawn lips make it look like Haoling has a moustache..

Thank you, though I'm not seeing the moustache my self. It's how a lot of artists draw mouths (CLAMP is mainly where I've gotten it from, and a little of Ken Akamatsu) so I just see it as natural.

I know its how alot of artist draw mouths but how you executed it made it look like a moustache to me IMHO

but the last 2 pics have made it look better good work

Thank you! I think it was the fact I coloured the rest of the line art and left that IN YOUR FACE BLACK like the eyelines. XD