One of the mods is probably going to move this thread to another section of the board later, but for now...

It actually seems a little rougher than some of the other stop-motion video on Youtube. It's not so bad for some of the motions that are meant to appear "slower" to the viewer, but for other actions like your custom shinki's cartwheel, or Howling's swinging arms as she "quickly" walks past the camera, it strains the illusion. You should be able to fix that simply by taking more photos with more incremental motion of the figures between shots.

Also, that custom shinki's face is... a little disturbing. Sorry. I'd actually recommend trying to create some sort of facial template on your computer, digitally editing it, printing it out, and gluing it onto the MMS Naked head. There are photos floating around both this site in particular and the Internet as a whole, that include decals meant specifically for changing the faces of Busou Shinki figurines; a little photoshoppery should let you get just the appearance you want. Is her hair cotton? I'd actually recommend sculpting a wig from polymer clay or something.

http://www.youtube.com/user/ziksm2036
http://www.youtube.com/user/plamoo
http://www.youtube.com/user/morden1998

These are other people doing more or less what you do. They might help you get ideas as to how to improve your animations.

It is a little rougher than I thought.......It was ok on my computer I guess it was because I uploaded it. But I do intend to remake it when I have a chance. AND I am only 14 so I'm still practicing my stop motion. Thanks for watching and thanks for your feedback .