Well, don't take it as a negative. The narrative of a bleak future in which machines have taken over the role of humankind is a familiar one. Samurai Seven had a similar arch as well with their retooling of Kurisawa's original as well. The way you are portraying it is unique though, and doesn't "copy" any theme. I guess we just see a lot of the things that make those other stories pop in yours as well. Keep it up,you have a gold mine to work with as regards characters. Don't be afraid to add conflict amongst your protagonists though, you have a varied cast and there are a LOT of egos amongst them. I'm looking forward to seeing more.royalpain88 wrote:This may come as a shock but ... I never watched any of the terminators.
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Well, it may be some time still before there is an update. Projects and work has delayed me from making any real progress in preparations. I have some nice scenery pieces almost done up. Never the less, I will try my best to continue with this project. I just need to re-write my scripts.
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Yay for violence on robots at a temple shrine! I enjoyed this. Thank you.
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And you're welcome. Folks, it's my birthday and so, allow me to return the favor and say thank you for your patience. For right now, part one of Hopes and Dreams: Redux, is now done. Enjoy.MrHolister wrote:Yay for violence on robots at a temple shrine! I enjoyed this. Thank you.
Until next week then.
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Nice dialogue and picture angles.
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Thanks. I am preparing to make pt 2 for this Friday.
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Waiting anxiously..royalpain88 wrote:Thanks. I am preparing to make pt 2 for this Friday.
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Sorry. Things have been slightly chaotic here. Will try to get pt 2 up tomorrow or this Friday.
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