royalpain88 wrote:This may come as a shock but ... I never watched any of the terminators.
Well, don't take it as a negative. The narrative of a bleak future in which machines have taken over the role of humankind is a familiar one. Samurai Seven had a similar arch as well with their retooling of Kurisawa's original as well. The way you are portraying it is unique though, and doesn't "copy" any theme. I guess we just see a lot of the things that make those other stories pop in yours as well. Keep it up,you have a gold mine to work with as regards characters. Don't be afraid to add conflict amongst your protagonists though, you have a varied cast and there are a LOT of egos amongst them. I'm looking forward to seeing more.