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It All Began With Shinki Stew...

Postby shizen22 » Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:59 pm

I created enough panels for a short comic so I'll make a thread for it. I don't expect to make many of them or very often but I'll do what I can. This looks to be a Shinki-centric comic but I do intend to introduce my TFs and other toys as ideas strike. This first comic was inspired by a suggestion by someone in the Shinki thread at TFW2005 which in turn brought to mind the Shinki stew from Shane's Comics so I ran off on that. I hope you enjoy!

1st episode (?)
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Later that night...
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End!! :p

PS: No Shinki was harmed in the making of this comic!
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PPS: Security officer Maochao guarantees it! :D
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PPPS: Any recommendations on how I should format the comics would be much appreciated! Serious web-comic n00b here! >_<
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby DragonArnval » Thu Oct 07, 2010 9:55 pm

Well, I lol'd :D

But Partio is ferret-type. Anyway, MOAR!!!
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby shizen22 » Fri Oct 08, 2010 12:00 am

I know she's (supposed to be) a ferret, I get plenty of complaints about that. But Partio looks cuter so phffft!! :schmetterling:
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby shizen22 » Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:09 pm

It All Began With Shinki Stew
Appendix 1.1 - A Day In Front Of The Camera


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Alternate ending:
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Pomock gives Partio a noogie to the head. I thought that was a bit mean considering she's been chopped up already so I went with lovey-dovey ending instead. Let me know which you guys prefer and I'll that into consideration for future strips. Also let me know if you prefer this smaller size or the previous bigger strip picture size.
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby shizen22 » Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:17 pm

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A few comments.
1) The effects like motion blur and especially the impact marks are definitely a hit & miss and inconsistent due to me experimenting with different styles & techniques. This is definitely a work in progress.
2) I'm definitely going on a regular vacuuming schedule. I shed hair like a cat does fur. Shooting for this comic made me painfully aware of the hair that's all over the place.
3) This is hosted on deviant since the neither flick nor PB supports vertically long pictures. If anyone else has hosting suggestions, please let me know! :vitulus:
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby Hylian Pirate » Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:26 pm

The minimalist approach to speech is great! I think they come out better when the girls "speak" emoticons and such. The fact that your sight-gags and expressive posing are awesome really helps this. Please, keep it up!
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby shizen22 » Sat Oct 23, 2010 12:13 am

Thanks. I'm not great at writing so I try to focus on other aspects to help make up for that. :schmetterling:
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby shizen22 » Wed Oct 27, 2010 1:52 am

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1) Yes, notice it's ep 2. I'm kinda moving this forward now.
2) Yeah, the writing is atrocious. You should see my previous drafts for the scout's dialogue. It's worthy of a strip in itself. :p
3) This is part 1 in a 3 part series. The 3rd part is where all the action will be so it might take me a while while I practice & experiment with more effects.
4) I'm going to go ahead with a Halloween special. I have an idea of what I want to do so I'm gonna go run with it. I'll hopefully have it up by Halloween.
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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby shizen22 » Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:33 pm

Here's the Halloween special! Since this thread moves really slow, I'm going to put each picture file in a separate post to move it along and also so there's not so many picture files in a single page/post. Here's part 1.

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Re: It All Began With Shinki Stew!

Postby shizen22 » Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:35 pm

Filler page. I wanna move the pictures to the next page dangit.
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